The Beauty of Thorns

Even if the village isn't that big (less than 20 inhabitants, and I am counting myself in this group), I can't find him at all.

"Hey, call down. You can pray out loud. I don't mind it, in fact I'll listen to one of your homilies."

Jenny asked Jack to wait in Eva 's office. Jack looked around and find a beautiful painting on wall . it was a breathtaking painting of a battlefield where whole place covered with red blood. it was a full bloody chilly scene . all men in painting had frosty and chilling expression like they come direct from hell. there were no any sympathy and emotion on their faces.

"I'm guessing you didn't ask command nicely first?"

Stand there and mother nest will scan you.

Never! Never! Never!  Never! Never!

very goodalthough you mixed tenses like present and past tenseso it's not cohesive but I love it

wow man you write so well and this story is very good you should be a writter full support from my side ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Why were the family members ill treating Elara it's really unfair none it was her fault, I like that she found were she belonged adapted so quickly and started training again, the writer is doing a good job so far keep it up