Promising synopsis,But very, VERY poor execution. It's a shame.Reads like a significantly worse version of losing money to be a Tycoon.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mc is dumb, dropped ch14. Needs to lay low and be careful since he says there are assassins who will attack talented youths. So he immediately goes and shows off his strength in front of the entire school audience. But even without that, he completely wastes his op class he awakened. Melee necromancer makes no sense. He legit just goes in and fights with melee while his op skeletons are sitting back doing nothing...what's the point of having the op skeletons then. His "melee focused necromancer" hidden class has no synergy with melee fighting so no, it's not a melee focused necromancer class, it's just mc wasting stat points so he can fight melee for no reason. Having defenses is fine, but getting strength so he can melee is a waste. Just because you have more stat points doesn't mean you should use them on someone unrelated to your class. It means you should use it to get more ahead of people by using the things you synergies with. You can either have melee stats and magic stats that are comparable to others or you could just have magic stats that are way higher. This is one of the things I hate seeing the most in necromancer novels lol, so a bit unrelated of a rant I guess. Basically, mc has some good op abilities but decides to not use them and instead become a melee fighter for no reason. He didn't need to, he had good skeletons who could fight for him.
It would be great if this is chosen. There is no better Urban novels nowadays and almost all of the chosen novels novels are eastern and scifi. It would be great if at least there will be Urban novel.
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I’m really loving this! Can’t wait for more chapters:) It’s on par with those popular wuxia novels, and it combines my favourite genres. Excited to see more chapters!
Congratulations Author on this piece of work. I rarely read sci books but am glad to read your work. You put a lot of work in the world building and I love the story development. Cheers and keep writing.
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