Wow with 55 reviews this got selected Impressive!!!While some novels got over 100 reviews!! It is not selected!!!Well what can I expect with an idiot editor!!!
Well, i can see that you are a newbie, but i hope that you can improve. The story looks a little cliche but i expect you to bring some uniqueness.. The character looks a little from what i expected after reading the synopsis but it is a good thing. I hope that instead of focusing on harem you will focus on developing a story
The first 25 chapters are pretty good and the author did a good job when writing fighting scenes. -----------------------------------------------------------
So... getting to the point.- The pace of the story is too slow- To actually enjoy reading this novel just pile up a hundred chapters then go, once you are finished with those 100 chapters stop, and wait for another 100 chapters to come out.- People say all the filler content is actually the author being careful and is actually developing the world, the characters and plot... Nonsense its filler! It is tedious to read and there is a bunch of stuff that is overly explained! Please author, Im not a 5 year old who is not capable of ****** obvious assumptions.- Story is actually pretty cool and the concept is amazing, characters are really good. It is fun read. - The setting of the story is overly explained. Chill author. - Did I mentioned that things are overly explained? Well... yes, things are overly explained. It is sometimes annoying. (Im looking at you ED!! It happens with you as well!)- Will you regret reading this? No, read it now! But if u get annoyed just stop and wait for chapters to pile up. In big amounts.- Yes, my 3 is because I hate filler. It is not development, its filler.
I like this story very much, even though its update speed is very slow at least in terms of the writing quality, it is very good. Also, I like the world background, it contains acient civilization and also modern technology. If you were to ask me? this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Moreover, I think the author should think about his release speed. It is extremely slow. If this goes on its going to affect your work. At least,the writer must let us know the durations between his releases. The story development isn't bad. The introduction is pretty good. Keep it up!!
Rating: 3.8 starWriting quality: 5 starNothing to talk about, very good written, especially the prologue. Stability of updating: 5 starActually wanted to give 1 star, but since author showed 0 chapter/week means he did what he promised.Story development: 4 starThe story is very well developed. We get information about the world slowly, not too much and not too little. It’s just enough making the story easy to follow.Character design: 1 starThis is the point which destroyed the whole story. It’s fine to make main character coward, ignorance or pushover etc. But it’s not fine to make main character stupid or a liar. World background: 4 starVery well done on the world building. Very creative and promising.
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