I read up to the latest chapter and have to say this story is amazingly good. after reading the disappointment that "my vampire system" was I was looking to quench my thirst for a good vampire novel and this is exactly it.
Has potential, hopefully i can rerate better after some more chapters pop up. Keep up the work and ill read it monthly (or quicker if alot of chapters pop up ) Also thos 140 character post min is annoying.
The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.
Knowing that the chapters are very long, it sure is an interesting read. It give me, how should I put this... "Excited" for more of the authors content. The plot was there, the characters was there. Even the setting was there.. Really deserve a 5 star review
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