I think the author puts it the best when he says that it is a slow burn. The writing quality is good, not many glaring mistakes and the story seems to be coming along nicely. For a first work, the author seems good enough, surely he'll improve as the story goes along. This seems like a gradual buildup kind of deal. I feel like the story has done a good job dodging a the cliches and so far, it seems like the MC isn't going to get a sudden cheat that will let him uncripple himself. Overall, I'd say, I recommend a read, at least.
With the author's perception in the field of arms and ammunitions leads the story line earing reality and so the ideas of conflict and interest lead the readers to understand the syntax and climaxes ..maximizing the interest to read on...So I read on... waiting for the next chapters.
She felt for a moment a pang of envy. Was it just the blissful ignorance of commoners who don't understand long-term implications of what people have seen today? Or just the core bravery of commoners to just not care, only that their friend was hurting?
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