Super Ninja

wow ,this is really great, you really deserve more read in this, is funny and a great story line .really thought it would be cliche ,but you proved me wrong  keep up the good work

Read till Chapter 126.The writer has a good hold of his writing style, and is very consistent overall. I like the story progression and generic motivation behind the MC. However, there is a glaring plot hole that is not covered at all. There is absolutely no mention of edged weapons at all in the academy time, but it was mentioned during 1st mission. This implies that they exist in this world. MC or his friends never encountered swords or other weapons when MC said that the land expansion of humans using gunpowder weapons was in stalemate. With the world low on technology, but still very much developed, it seems weapon forging would have been a great boon to humanity.Making this a complete martial arts novel is cool. Depending solely on flesh and bones to survive and excel without armor and weapons is a very good concept, but projectiles should be included. Humans created shields and bows of wood before metal, and it is established that trees are plentiful in this world. Cultivation without any energy to depend upon is very challenging and I commend the author to make it this detailed. Maybe they introduce it later on. They are already hinting at lightning, wind attributes, and whatnot, and if they do introduce energy/mana/qi I am curious as to how they incorporate it into a story without much foreshadowing. Overall at this point, I am bored of highly detailed martial art and want some exciting flexs instead of reasonable disapointment.

Read up to ch47: The MC is Naive with Hero Complex who fights unprepared and without foresight. The enemies and bandits are dumb as they don't kill and clean up potential revenge plots. Students from other academies are naive and ignorant unbecoming of a world where strength rules. Maybe their trainers don't teach them how the world works (Spoiler: Imagine sending your prized students to their death by not teaching them common sense. ) We are brought to a world where the strong rules yet dissemination of life preservation knowledge is lacking in refinement

The fact that I was just searching for VR novels, and this came rushing just at the right time. And I love how it is super realistic, and also the main character has a stable mind and doesnt rush immediately to kill mobs is 5 stars for me :>>

hey hey hey , isn't it kinda shameless to just copy the names of the Protagonist of Yakuza Game Series? and to boot it looks like it will go to the direction where yakuza headed. he has a younger sister in place of the daughter kiryuu adopted in the series.

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I don't know whether you listen to my suggestion or if was already there , but i wanted focus on james , and he came into focus but with it cam focus on whole shaw family, i feel going forward focus will be on it .

well , to this point of the story, this is the best one among the tial novels and even among the current translating ones. a good novel to this point.