Soul Fragments

I’m so loving Ariadne. She beaten but she in not broken. I do think she has cracks. She has such a fiery attitude

You know what I like it. You have to write more chaps coz this is a good story. And your a good writer btw.I'll put this on my library and comment from time to time to support you haha so please update a little faster. *wink wink*

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According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though.And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.

I'm truly impressed by the plot development and narration of this story, It is well-crafted and captivating. The contrast between Reigan and Celine is really strong and I do want to read more!

Arnav says okay and disconnects the call.

Epsilon was nearby, he was sitting cross-legged on the same smooth stone surface she'd been lying on, gazing out at the clouds.

[Fine, but remember what you can!]