Soul Fragments

Nice story, the pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow either.the Mc's abilities are overpowered but stay within reason. they are also fun to play with. though when he got that nerve control skill I wonder why he never thought about increasing his reaction speed or even his perception of time, that would've been OP. all in all, it's a good read for a Naruto fanfic. keep it up!

This book is really good, simple and easy to understand. Every thing goes well so five star instead. I recommend to read it.

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