So You Want To Be A Writer?

This story is good! I could only read two chapters because I am broke and can't afford unlocking chapters.  But from what I have read, it is well written, the characters are realistic and likable. Plot also seems nice.  

Very catching synopsis. I'm definitely sticking. Lol.

One way to describe this novel, quite odd and unique at the same time:I know the beginning is quite shocking especially with the main character suicide, but at the end he got the consequence which is become something like a lifeless doll which. As he become the lifeless doll, he met with three strange girls that had a distinct personality with one another.For me is pretty interesting take on and there is some direction that the author can dig up more with the relationship between the three mysterious girls. The three mysterious girl is itself have their appearance and demeanor very diverse with one another that I can't wait for their development for the future and also the main character too when he interacted with those girlsAs for the flow of the story is quite smooth for me so far, but for the description, I believe the author can give more in next few chapters. Anyway, that's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work with weird, story(it's just only my opinion)

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Cliche? Sometimes, but instead of being annoyed, I found it to be fun. Cringe? Maybe yes maybe not. But for me, the story plotline is good. My only complaint is the number of words is getting smaller from chapter to chapter. This makes me think it's not worth it to exchange my fast pass or coins for unlocking your chapter.

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Finally.... What I want is not an anti hero but an cold blooded psychopath who is epitome of evil. Hope this novel is same and MC needs to be OP..... Hope translation picks up fast

Heyyah!!!      One thing that I'd say is that this book caught my attention from the very first look of the synopsis 👀❤️ To clean & clearly say is, that I love this  book from the first sight. Good writing quality. Hope the author improves more in the future. Never stop writing ☺️ 🤝🏻 The more you write the more you improve ✨      I'm not sure about the updating stability, for it is a book that is still lacking contents and saying that, it's new so it's understandable❣️ But... so far I love the story development and the character designing ✨🤝🏻❤️ Usually, a system plotted book always brings out an interruption but this book didn't. Ok Frankly TBH, I'm not gonna contrast any other books, for every books have their own way of charm and not every book suites everyone, so thumbs up, dear AuthorKeep up the good work 🤝🏻 My best wishes (˘⌣˘ )Much love,O_S_M_1015❣️