Slime's Journey:Tales of Looper[Discontinued]

Dude someone humiliated,raped and tortured your woman in public and you pay him an absi4d amount of money for it. Mc is got to be the most idiotic mf i ever met in my life. Why not take that money and go to some of the big gun so they just off your enemy. Author you sure you are thinking straight?

It's fine. Not amazing, not bad. The worst part about this novel is that it's yet another dumb 16 year old young master protagonist. Are authors alergic to adults? This is a story that fits an adult protagonist in every aspect. For the love of god authors, release yourselves from the prison of fascination with children.

please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.

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Amazing book, love the plot and  execution  HATE the slow updates. But I will keep reading when it died update and only hope it covers quickee

Writing Quality: Amazing. As you keep writing New Novels and Chapters, your quality is increasing quickly. If it was good before, now it is much better.Stability of Updates: Managing 7 Novels and still being able to release 4-5 chapters per week (including Auxiliary) is a good accomplishment.Story Development: Loved this one. The story is pretty unique with a Diverse Caste of Characters. You can relate to the story as it involves various Ancient and Modern Historical Figures.Character Design: If you are looking for humor with Characters, who are very serious themselves, this is it. Meet Vinston Church-ill, and Oda Nubonaga in here!World Background: Oh! This is the best part. With many Mythological, Historical and Modern Nations existing together in a parallel world, it is a fun & joyful ride. Full 5stars.

First off this is really well written. Writing about MOBA's can get tricky because you risk a massive info dump, but I think the author has done a great job of it while keeping it interesting. I like the character types, but I feel they are too rigid in their archetype, I would have liked a little more gray and less black/white. Still that is fine and the archetype for the mc is particularly interesting. My real problem with the characters is their age vs how they behave/talk, they definitely behave/talk above their age.I hope the author continues doing such a good job and we get to see a really good coming of age story.

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