Hmm, I like the concept, and I hope you enjoy writing this work, so I need you to stay healthy and never get sick, and I will pray to Goddess of Enlightenment to give you her blessing haha 👊😎
Hello everyone! This is an updated review after the novel was out for 6 months by now!I saw a lot of authors writing the pros and cons of their works, So I decided that it is the perfect time to do one for my novel since there is already 300+ chapter available!Pros:>Extensive and fleshed out world background that would let you immerse yourself in the world much smoothly and find the logic in it although it is a piece of fiction!>MC isn't dense, stupid, virgin. He knows his priorities and doesn't chase skirts or risk his life over stupid shit.He is lazy and doesn't like having burdens. However, he is hardworking when it is concerning his strength.He is shameless, an asshole, and a bit of a troll. But, he is serious when he had to.He isn't a white knight neither he plans to be one.>English is not the best but it's not the worst either. I make sure to edit my chapters before releasing them and always check on previous mistakes.>Updates: 2 Chapters every day with a word count ranging from 1600 to 2000.>The First Volume was my 1st ever written volume so it wasn't really the best thing that I have written. But please bear with mistakes you see or the style of writing as from 2nd volume upward, the writing just keeps getting better and better.>Give it until the 2nd volume when he enters the UVR and sees if you like it then or not. **: There are 88 chapters for free to start!>No harem.....Cons:>As I mentioned the first volume was a bit draggy than it should be and the writing wasn't the best in it.>Side Characters: I am trying my best to develop them one by one but I still prefer focusing more on the MC to keep the plot going at a faster pace. So, you can expect not much from them in those 300 chapters. (Drastic changes or something like that.)>No Harem, don't know if it is a con or pro, but I will just put it in both sections.>I have been told that my writing style is quite jarring by some readers, but I will leave you to decide that on your own....That should be it probably? If I missed anything, please write it in the comments, and please do know that I accept criticism with a thick face just make it logical and I will try my best to see what I can do about it.Thank you and I hope you join the journey with me and the rest of my lovely readers <3<3<3(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
No matter how acceptable MC is, when 90% of the text are praises to MC money and possessions it's really not worth it. It's one thing when Sign In allows MC to be cool, it's entirely another when Sign In is cool and MC is simply attached to it.
Basically a trash...all those fking points yet he can't increase that fked up concealment shi t ...and complain about not having points to increase...and the author is literally a dog fker that doesn't even explain any fk he's writing...this is one of the worse type of novels...no offense to any authors...but this type of novels authors are a disgrace...
Short chapters. it would've been fine if it weren't for fillers taking most of the chapters. the story is decent but again, there's too many fillers for the story to progress
I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
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