Reborn as Raven in Dc... But as a Futa?

Things might of just cranked up

So far as I’ve read it’s a good story but needs an editor because the quality of writing detracts from it.

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Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit. I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.

Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel

The female lead is really intelligent and smart. I like her. I hope her life will not end miserable.

the book have potential and have a very nice storyline...the author really manage to gape the action... love the work...💖✨👌🏻