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Don't read this after like a few hundred chapters, it really goes completly downhill, tried to finish this, buts it almost impossible to read with being infuriated by the same cliches used over and over again and the same lazy writing...does this guy not know how to write anything other than "mc  (teamate) gets injured and he must rise up" among other things.

I personally think the translator is really bad ,having read the versions of other translators . The story is really good tho. I wish Qidian gets better translator to do the author's work justice!!

This book is huge gigantic work in progress; as the writer grow there will be things they will see and understand. but for now this book is horrible for people that need story context and structure oor just the basic power level info.  I read up to chapter 17 before abandoning it. as a new writer this has showed me that context is always needed and not only action. I will have to review my work again before uploading.

Hmmm… how should i say it…After chapter 20 or so the writing quality would decrease drastically [Example: He became 2 times stronger because of the Golden Power              Suddenly a Golden energy flourished inside his Merdians.]It’s like the beginning of the Chapter is the End of the ChapterAnd the End of the chapter is the BeginningAuthor pulled a Uni Reverse on this

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This is basically a collection of random things throughout human history. It might give you a laugh or two.Tell me how I can improve.I'm always open to constructive criticism.

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Ok ok, you've got my attention, A better version of Tyranny of Steel so far, atleast that's what I think... Let's see where the story goes...