"Mandy" it a small voice but Mandy immediately recognized the person. Its Wendy, who was covered with darkish red all over her body. Mandy got worried in her appearance, there must be something happening outside.
Okay, so I was waiting until there were at least 10 chapters before I gave a review. The story follows Elara as she's dragged into her favorite novel to save Caspian before he turns into a villain and goes off the deep end. The writing is good, I find it very enjoyable and engaging, and the world building is pretty interesting. These first ten chapters have been setting up the world and introducing characters but it's been pretty engaging thus far and I look forward to reading more. I would definitely recommend it!
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I love Vampire booksI am so glad to see this masterpiece and I look forward to reading more for Freyr and Tor to see how this unfolds. Cheers and thanks
Title β Cover? β Synopsis β I love the story idea as welll, if there is one thing I strongly feel that the author can improve is their paragraphs. They feel too cluttered and it would be great if you can divide the paragraphs short!!
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