Primordial Remnants

Right now, author has made the effort to improve his or her writing, and while its still jumping from here to there. It is still a good and relaxing story so far.The Updates that the author promised of 2-4 chapters is being keep, but it’s more like it’s being keep at 2 chapters every day.Story development is not great, but it’s not bad either. At most, I can tell that the author at least has a direction to head towards to.Character designs on the other hand, the cover is good but if we went with description of a the characters in the novel itself, only the character “Mirelle” has been describe. I hope to see a proper cover in the future and a description of the main character in the future. I still don’t know her name. Lol.The world feels alive at the very least. It isn’t as alive as LOTM since it’s just the start of the story, but with the recent chapters, it kinda feels alive. Like it feels a bit deep. I hope the world gets more alive and more deep as the story continues.If this continues to be free for another 10 to 15 chapters, I might review it again later.

"Yes, I noticed it this morning when this nightmare Asia spoke about was brought up this morning. He has been having this distant look in his eyes every now"

"Naisha dear, ah it's been awhile you have visited this old man, you don't look so good, dear. Are you okay?"

"Kau sudah mengetahui itu?"

"Excellent. I will give you this bow in exchange for my entertainment."

This has been your author Carlos, take care all you guys and gals...and that coloful rainbow in between!!!!

Smart and well thought out although the pacing can be a bit slow in places but it adds to the world building it’s not your over the top protagonist growing unstoppable and immortal in a day kind of novel

wow ,the beginning is already so hooking 🥹 great job author 👌