amazing story, amazing author, details yet no over detailing.Clear progression and change...............................................,,Just read it. Its one of the best out there.
A new book that will blow your socks off. I guarantee you. It's a reincarnation/transmigration fantasy book. The beginning is good, the story line is interesting, the characters are well written, the grammar is good too. Looking forward to more chapters.
All in all i made it to chapter 2. I normally give at least 20 chapters of a read for a novel i choose to read. NoneTheless, this one i cant read any further. Why? Here it comes: Guy saves the girl, she r**** him, extracts his yand eneRgy so he cannot cultivate and is crippled. then she gets quadruplets and wants HIM to Take RESPONSIBILITY. the audacity. then she goes there and talks to him like he is tradh, she wonders why he is a „good for nothing and is wEak.“ Worse, the mc takes it like it is nothing. seriously? How stupid is that. /////////////////imagine the roles are reversed: Girl gets r****, then has to get children and is also forced to take care of them. now, that doeSnt sound good does it? /////////////alll in all, the novel is as bad as it can get.
Fabulous. One of the best novels I've read, it's got details, a world, unique characters, and a good story, it's overall just a great and unique read.The only "not great" parts are firstly the information bombs that were dropped in the first few chapters, explaining how everything in the game worked and so on, which at first seems annoying to read, but you don't have to get stuck on it, as it'll all make sense soon enough, don't drop the novel because of it(as some have). The other "bad" thing about this novel, and the reason why it's score dropped a bit for me is it's inconsistent updates, and rather slow updates.. which is really understandable as he's writing the story, and not translating it I believe, and it's much more work than just reading something and writing it down in a different language. Even so, the author's not to blame, it's just that this novel is so good that it leaves me wanting for more, checking daily until finally a new chapter is out, and so I'm trying to get some recognition for the novel by writing this review.Try it out(you may skip the information bombs about the game workings, you'll not enjoy it any less if you find those troublesome, endure it)
Gonna say, this is one of the best VRMMO stories I've had the pleasure if reading, character is relatable and down to earth, but not to the point of being stepped on by others. Not prideful to the degree of tearing down what others build out of spite, and has a strong sense of loyalty to those who've done right by him. Might not sound like much in this context but the author does a great job following his characters adventures in an apathetic uncaring world with few Ray's of light to illuminate his path.Next is story for me. Vaguely as I can without spoiling is that this story is in a well constructed world, both for the characters reality and the virtual reality, there isnt any good or bad people that most writers do their best to polarize and apply, the relationships and people of this book are just as complex and understandable as the main character. Everyone has their own reasons and are bound by their own circumstances, certainly their are a few scattered arrogant thugs but that run around in the story, but it's not all that impactful to the world, main character, or flown of the story, So what I'm saying is that this story is well thought out and is very well constructed, its humorous, its tragic, its thrilling, its tense, it has a lot put into it and is an enjoyable read.If I were to say anything bad about it, story release is chaotic at certain times, sometimes will be one a day or go to one a week. Changes quite a bit xD but I'll give it to the author anyway because the story maintains its quality, atleast to my eye.
Have mixed feelings, am currently at chapter 1364. Liked the pace until like chapter 700 (when it was still somewhat easy to follow), but then then the first big arc full of action is as long as 600 or more chapters and still hasn't finished. Am getting tired by it at this point, but unlike cliffhangers in other novels this one actually has good plot and characters so i want to finish the arc and see what's next. But as for the current arc, there are so many plot twists, the author pitied a couple forces and several other mastermind-like individuals with their own agendas, when you think there can't be more behind the scene plotters and so many powerful guys with unclear motives, hey, a new one pops up.. what's worst is that they can be some random girl or a simple-looking with average power, and most of them survive one way or another until the climax.. so when you think a character can't make a comeback, it does.. one guy seems to be your own, but then teams up with enemy, then becomes an ally again.. and then enemy again, then peace contract, then one of the main bosses.. so many characters pit each other.. So many characters changed so many sides during the arc that as a reader it makes me feel uneasy and uncomfortable, mostly because it really drags and drags on while things became so so complicated and absurd.. in just this one arc, we have the parasiting of the host, symbiosis with host, undeads, those that can predict future, change flow of time, change past and future, detect luck, reincarnate, seal their own memories or abilities.. alter memory.. space shift... teleport.. isolate space.. have ,,vessels" in their body.. and many more. There's also mind reading, though i am unclear, because we're shown a lady that can read minds, then a couple hundred chapters later the main developer girl says that mind reading doesn't exist, puts an argument as to why and explains that it's only possible to deduce things based on emotions.. a plot hole i guess? Not sure because that lady was foreshadowed and disappeared for hundreds of chapters and she's likely to appear before the arc ends so maybe there's yet another plot twist.. where she turns out to be some rare-to-be-seen cheat-like individual :PWhat's refreshing is that unlike other novels, the characters there don't really rely that much on artifacts or items that pop out of nowhere and are their great reliance. They do have hidden cards that they keep surprising you with, but it's not really rings, swords or the like. More like, as mentioned before, it's some mastered forbidden spell, sealed power, pre-planned allies.. fabricated past so as to mislead or bluff others.. and various other tricks. Only in some cases it's e.g. a replica of an item that replays a fragment of the near past to e.g. open the same portal again, but these are only used once because these items only have value when others don't know about them and hence can't take these into account.1364 chapters, the plot is so "elaborate" and long that it's suffocating. Making all these stuff appear in one arc is a bit too much in my opinion, it's almost like every character plays some kind of crucial role or identity. There are barely any simple guys with names that keep appearing in the plot that don't play important roles, you think you already know everything about a character's depth but it later turns out he hids even more deeply and has other secrets. Many key characters have a plot armor that is too thick.. they can be outplayed, wounded, tricked, sealed, killed several times but they still survive!! it's as if someone wrote a couple arcs into one instead of introducing these things slowly over a couple smaller arcs. Am really wondering, if the first big arc that is taking place in a small insignificant area is so long and has so many characters with their own agendas, than what about future arcs? Will author write even longer and more complicated arcs with even more allies and enemies? The plot is so well written that he can easily go for over 10 000 chapters this way.Will write a new comment again, maybe after i finish the arc and see the next one.. but so far these are my thoughts.
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