Uhhmmm..In my opinion what I hate the most in novels is the repeating structure of arcs, like for example first arc MC meets an arrogant handsome powerful enemy then gets oppressed and he meets some difficulties then whaack! He defeats the enemy!! Then the same situation happens in the next arc, arrogant enemy,oppressed, defeating enemy and it becomes a loop.
An incredible novel of magic with the element of modern ages and romance, you get a MC Jason with a deep, dark history and same goes with the female protagonist Alina. The story really paced itself smoothly for readers to read comfortably. Kudos to the author, he really has a lot of ideas in his mind when writing and he also has an incredible knowledge of English when writing. Grammar wise aint a issue, the author is really careful about his work.I can see nothing stopping this novel from being a good pieced of work, this book definitely needs more publicity, I hope that more fans of magics and urban can come and read this novel too.
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Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.
This story actually includes everything in the title. The MC and all subsequent interactions fill the bill. I continue to look forward to reading each chapter.
Hmm.. Where do I start? 😂Author pretty much has everything down. A few chapters revealed that much. Unlike a lot of low quality books on the app, I can honestly say this was well planned out and written. MC is very relatable and not a simp in any way. Chapter length is also impressing (satisfyingly long) with very little grammar issues. Gotta hand it to the author. Although, I must warn you. the narration can get boring at times but it's most time captivating. Pay close attention or else you won't understand what's going on. I'll leave a more detailed review later on. The novel is just starting but it's potential can't be ignored. Keep it up Author
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