Hello Well the author finally did it .He has finally made the storyPretty good written till now and fore shadowing is nice. Well we just need to wait for an editor now to jumpstart things
I love this story! It is like a typical Xianxia, but with a few twists to make it more enjoyable for a western audience. It has far less filler, with chapter 82 correlating to around chapter 400 in a typical Xianxia, and the world seems relatively well thought out, it is clear that there are more details about the world that aren't being told to avoid an overly large info dump, but it doesn't feel like the Author ever pulls things out of his ass. There are a few downsides typical to web novels, the grammar is pretty good but not professional quality by any means, and the characters aren't really well fleshed out (still better than a typical web novel).Ultimately I would recommend this story to anyone who likes Xianxia stories, as it feels like a well-executed no-fluff Xianxia with a western twist.
This is a fun novel to read but the writing quality is a bit bad. Still very readable and exciting. balbalbalablabalbalabalbalbalabbalablablabalbalbalablaba
OMG the kdrama names I love them so much because I watch kdrama. Love the characters I knew he still loved her though he pretended not to . Job with this one Author
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agreed the system quests are starting to take a turn for the worst i mean getting quest like that to troll the mc is funny but doing it over and over is starting to kill the story
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