Once Bitten

Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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Se tu ler até o capitulo 10 vai perceber que o mc é arrogante e idiota. Não vou perder tempo onde pra ler texto cheio de clichês e que de "demônio" o mc não tem nada. Nem sei como uma pessoa dessa conseguiria viver tanto tempo(600 anos) em lugar cheio de matança que é o mundo do cultivo.

I'm about to do what's called a pro gamer move *laughs evilly*Okay but seriously, this is my first novel and I'm still inexperienced if you have any advice or critics(good or bad) feel free to tell. Thanks in advance

Concept is good but the story is so slow that it becomes very irritating.                                                                  .

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Noah started out behind in the social bracket and was bullied because he wasn't the best looking being looked down in his daily life when one day he finds a book that changes his life giving him everything he needed to become someone else with power unimaginable to humans! Def recommend this one.

I noped out as I've seen a few too many LNs with bad editing. It honestly seems promising. With the corona virus epidemic, depression has been at an all time high. So bad editing now bothers me more so than it used to.