If this mc turns out to be cold ruthless and calculating then we might have a similarity to warlock of magus world.Which would be a good thing cuz that was a good novel. Long story short if he goes bad with good reason miggt be goodGoes bad with stupid reason and the author screws a good plotGoes bad properly turns good. Half-asses it and it turns crappyWell cheerio Ps. I haven't actually read the book yet but looking forward to it
I really like the story and world building .The thing that is settim me off is the good side of the MC cause he's really annoying and it makes it difficult to read while is in charge. Can't the MC embrace the evil side and become one? Evil mc is a menace.keep up author 🫡
I couldn't even finish ten chapters. The hero, instead of trying to show off his talent in alchemy, makes himself look stupid. And everyone starts making fun of him. 99% of the chapters I read contain mockery and contempt for the hero. I bet the whole novel is like this.
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i really loved it aspecialy the pacing fast quality ass pacing with a competent mc that is not an arrogant asshole nor chasing down some harem for stupid reasons and just a genuinly nice fic liked how you used other light novels to create the world more in your favor so that we imagine but cant say its like a certain thing which allows you to throw of our expektation sometimes
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