Most boring story l've read, I understand l'm being harsh since there's only 28 chapters out now but I nearly fell asleep twice reading it. I don't mind slow pace stories but I felt as if the premise wasn't used at all. I don't know if it's the author how he writes he's stories as l've read some of he's previous works and usually drop them after 40 chapters or the translation but I felt major dissappointment from reading it. Of course though my opinion is probably the only negative review seeing how everyone loves it so l guess read it anyways since the story is a mix of fantasy and steam punk.
Yo author, im gonna try this novel, i know you from the achievement junkie, it is one of the best novel in webnovel i guess, i believe this will have the same quality with your other novel as well. Nice grammar, interesting background, good story development.
Read few couples of chapters and yes I see how potentially well to do this novel is!The novel starts great, the progressing events surrounding the mc who is on his path to regain back his fame and honor is very concisely written. The use of several incidents is portrayed balancing the plot hand in hand. The book has a great many tags to keep in mind which is wonderfully put together. *you need to keep a lookout for typos. Good job author!
I enjoyed this book and was giggling constantly, gotta love the dense characters hehehe ;) this is a very loving book and thank you for the smut warnings (so I could find an hidden spot we’re no one could hear me squeal) your writing style is good but you could have made a more in-depth description of what happened between time periods and the growth of the relationships between the characters. I thoroughly enjoyed this, I hope to see more in the future. Keep up the good work!!!From a loving fan!
This story blew me away. The world building is amazing, Jack is such an enthralling character, and even the side characters are well developed. The power system is unique and this entire story is so good that I am desperately hoping that the author keeps writing, and it gets the attention it deserves.
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