Naruto: Harem No Jutsu

For inner-voice enjoyers. Entertaining before I stopped to pick it back up later when further chapters come. Fun series with focus on character reactions.

Where are you buddy? we need enlightenment. we need guidance. we need YOU!...............................................................................................................

Gao Peng and Ye Xuan both have system to upgrade beast easily as long they have the materials for it.Gao Peng had Merciful Liberator Zi as his first contract pet, his family centipede. Ye Xuan first contracted pet is his family elf.When Gao Peng need materials for evolution, he ask his grandpa(later chapter), in this novel Ye Xuan ask Lin Shiru (from the start)Gao Peng had a space sttribute Jellyfish and Treasure Seeker Mouse, in this novel Ye Xuan got a snail? that has space attribute and love treasure.Gao Peng's Jelly fish love to sit on Gao Peng head and looks like a hat, the same with Ye Xuan snail.If you have read Monster Pet Evolution you'll find a lot of similarities in this novel, but I like MPE more than this novel because Gao Peng character is more likeable than Ye Xuan. Gao Peng is a lone wolf, no one to rely on except for Da Zi.while Ye Xuan got everything from the start, and keep getting furtuitous encounter one and another.Gao Peng pets most of them is a trash monster but he upgrade it into a strong and domineering monster, and he has emotional attachment to most of them.Ye Xuan pet that close to Gao Peng's is only the elf Xiao Wan I think? although this novel isn't better than MPE, I don't mind to read this in my spare time.

well I leave the novel here I hate the 4th wall, the MC is also very embarrassing and talks about the children of destiny..., he looks like a child and is supposed to be reincarnated, I didn't like the humor at all

This looks like it was edited by a professional, instead of the usual new inexperienced unpaid interns from the last few cycles! I almost had a stroke from surprise!

good novel.mc brain works, makes sense. good novel, let the author continue the novel...................................................................

Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.

this is very good. I hope the story continues                                                              :                      .                   .