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I'm so happy to see this series continue. Lemuel and Sebastian do not disappoint. Love it.

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Started off strong and interesting. Sadly random injection of Journey to The West that was poorly executed made the story extremely boring and going in weird directions. Also the ending 💀💀💀. Absolute disgrace what the author did. They realized that they wrote their story to the ground and axed it.

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I’m rating it perfect because it’s about virtual reality games a good genre.👍👍👍👍👍👍.                                      

Possibly the best original books on this site in my opinion, it has a very interesting premise and good execution, however there are some parts that could be made better, for me the format of quotes are sometimes hard to read. The content is enjoyable but sometimes a bit weird, mc returns from fantasy world, sure. But how the hell did the original world gets copy of the fantasy world, while it may not be an exact copy it is on a thin line. I may have possibly read wrong on that tho. Also there seems to be a bit too many beauties already, I think it was 4 by now, to be honest it is a very common trope in novels and I thought this novel would go a bit differently but not so far so ~~ eh. That’s about all I could find wrong with it, wait I would think that this story requires some planing so it would take longer to write with it’s weird/different plot, it already shows. Yeah that’s about all, if your looking for a fresh breath into the vrmmorpg genre this is possibly the best choice in this platform.

Great novel. Author also updates twice a day, so it's great.The mc is ruthless. And great. And undead. And can absorb characteristics of things he eats.

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