Honestly, I’m coming to dislike this MC more and more. He is cowardly and is constantly flaunting his potential around, sure it’s funny, but all he does is hide and cultivate as if once he becomes immortal he will be invincible. Which I highly doubt because 1. Dude look at the world your in no one dies from disease 2. With no fighting experience your weak no matter your cultivation 3. When you’re immortal I fail to believe you’re undying so other immortals can kill you and lastly he is acting like your typical young master spoiled thinking he need not do anything because he already has everything when he really has nothing, it’s disappointing and I’m disgusted.
@Ch. 69; You will read paragraphs upon paragraphs of how strong the attack and how grievous the wounds are, yet no one fucking dies. It's the most frustrating thing in the world. The story is kept at a standstill because the enemies are being protected by plot armor. Everyone has protagonist correction. When everyone is a protagonist, no one is. Now the story goes nowhere.There was also this random as **** traveller?? Literally appeared out of nowhere and gave him literal plot armor. So many plot holes and plot armors. If that is your type of story then read on.
Bruh .I forced myself to keep reading based on 'MC will get better ' and ' story will get better . How much more torture do i have to endure, how many more braincells do i have to sacrifice before this actually gets better???!!!
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After a few minutes had gone by the lion stopped and sat down right in front of me. The lion gave of a weird feeling and its eyes were most likely the source of this. The lion's eyes appeared to be looking into me, while in reality its eyes were glossed over. as I mentally felt sweat dripping down my back, I started to slowly take a step backward. The lion, as if sensing something pounced at me.
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