Moving Into My Ex-Husbands House

Great overall just wished there was more.

I first thought that it would be just *** and the story will lag, but surprisingly the story is more interesting and the plot holds itself, the *** stuff is secondary. Characters are well developed and even the tertiary characters are nicely portrayed which in turn seamlessly binds the story, plot and the characters.Thank you for writing this.

Sounds interesting and promising please pick it, not some copy with changed names pleaselike for realziufcktvgvhvjbjbj kbjvj hvg いj府のいt部卯brfyhu

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this had potential till you did one the worst things your could evee do 1. you made your mc evil thats just trash. all evil mc are just trash. 2. you forced corrupted and forced made the mc evil for litteraly no reason you made ut clear the ring would corrupt and twist the wearer yet the mc still chose the ring? why? thats stupid it would change who he is...the moment you amde this chkice this was no longer about an mc who went back in time to have a second chsnce at ljfe but a while new person that is just trash...

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To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now.The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet.The last point is that  this story isnt predictable at all .Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.

"That's why we're here, to change the past and secure the future"  the man in the black trench coat retorted.

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"Sebegitu bencinyakah Digo padanya" jerit hati Gea.

Qin Yu lowered her head as she clenched her hand into a fist under the table, hatred flitting through her eyes. This father wanted to shirk his fatherly duties and send her away. As for this little sister of hers, although she said it like she was putting her in consideration, wasn't it just that she also didn't want an illegitimate child in her house?

"Hehehe..."Cilan smiled awkwardly and had been watching them leaving.