Me And My Five Siblings

Look author buddy I Kinda into Villain story stuff After reading RI. You story looks kinda classic saving world stuff,faceslaping coming back with big gun which MC already have but it’s for little boys…right…ok your story good check Cheerful people check New readers Check Bye I am not good in reviews But story is good for beginners I say …OK Tata bye

Alright i read 20 chapters in, and yeah its quite solid especially with the author clarifying its their first rodeo i believe. Now its not without its faults, lets get the big hurdle out of the way, the main character is a big mary sue. Not really a spoiler as around 18 chapters in its revealed hes had "sword and gun training" and that he was " a genius" who quit because he found it boring. Not to mention his perfect figure and attractive features the first chapter in.  Look, you can enjoy this for what it is especially when there is a lot worst, there are no overbearing cliches here. Well aside from Mr Perfect MC. He does struggle but at a superficial level. Also minor gripe, his actions and thoughts being somewhat contradictory? He thinks others are a burden while risking his hide for an inhaler, that isnt to say human beings aren't flexible and contradictory in nature. So thats not really a major issue but i felt it should atleast be addressed. OH, lets talk about the only female 20 chapters in who's an office worker who coincidentally is a kendo three time championship who also coincidentally has a kantana sword becuase coincidentally it was her first day on the job... Idk it could happen but very unlikely and it just had me rolling my eyes E N ways thats about it. Have a good one.

The translator randomly posts chapter in any order as per his his fancy. This is not an error that occurs once but has happened at least 5 times in the past few months. It destroys the story continuity and wastes the spirit stones. Also stops notifications when the actual chapters in sequence release because it's not the most recent chapter.

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love this book so so much! i wish JKS can pick it back up even if he isn't earning much 😭 after MDS, MVS, this is my next fav

18 chapters a week? wow thank you for putting so much in this novel :) .....................................................................

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Cant stop reading until the end, some of the chapters were hard to read, overall enjoyed it very much. Hoping more updates please!!! Suggestion would be more explanation to the world setting, please?