Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.Still, I don't recommend this.The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.Don't read this, save your eyes!
Great story, but the mc is lacking a little in the brain department. He always rushes the floor guardians. Very few of his minions survive. He should have spent days making minions way stronger than him to help clear the way. Merge them so much that they all become S rank.
The appraising elder recorded the value in his notebook, then continued, "93 Class 2 Monster Cores, huh! If nothing unexpected happens, then you will definitely be part of the top 3 places for Class 2 Monster Cores. In addition, you are the Cultivation Genius, so your future is boundless. Keep working hard."
The place started to reform. One by one changes happen, from their original state they turn into another form, including the living beings. The classrooms in the hallway changed, from an ordinary classroom to a room full of liquid-dispensing-machines. The students watching also changed, from being a normal and healthy looking student they turned into disgusting folks; looking like those weird people in the night- drinking alcohol and smelling like they came out from the trash. And let's not forget our challenger here, His appearance changed as well, and as what I expected to be- wearing a crown made out of gold on his head, having a red cape at his back and being half naked. Disgusting, everything here is just disgusting. I could just vomit here, right now.
The MC is amazing the fact he has a certain goal and isn't some characters wandering around lost and with literally no use in the plot makes the story nice.Good job in this story I love it and I recommend to other readers
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