MITHRAN

started good, but the quality is just going down. sucks when they care more about nationalism than the story. And starting chapter 870 the chapters are not real chapters. just rubbish Wich repeats every 3 chapters.

guess I'm giving this 5 stars,..........

[Reviewed on: 06-03-2022][Reading status: 8th chapter][Strength: Face slapping, strong character development, fusion of two genres][Weakness: Well, according to me, it's super cliche cultivation novel]- The title says it all, literally half of the expected plotline.- A possibly weak-to-strong MC- Cliche cultivation settings and world- Magic, pills, martial arts are an expected part along with explicit scenes- A lot of girls, cultivation, energy and the goal to get stronger- However I personally felt that the initial chapters had nothing different to offer. It followed traditional formation and plot to set the ground. - In the midst of ocean of eastern cultivation books what this one has to offer? The NPC theme from prior life seemed to be faded after transmigration, diverting back to old cliche plot.If you're interested in eastern cultivation then this is for you. [Additional remarks]The author has improved visibly compared to his previous books.The flow and pace is good, every scene execution is done wonderfully Talking about grammar and stuff, don't worry over that.

This story is fairly confusing. Lots of detailed cultivation mumbo jumbo which is meaningless, even the plot itself is barely explained, miss a single sentence, or interpret a paragraph ever so slightly differently than the author intended, and suddenly nothing makes sense.At this point I gave up on trying to make sense of the novel and am just along for the ride.

Appreciate your effort author for your work It's really good read till now. Rooting for future chapters                                  V           Thanks

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Hello, Eshwar here 👋, it's chapter 71 currently and the end of Vol.1 introductions. Thank you for reading and Thank you for all the comments, they have motivated me a lot. I just wanted to leave another review after the end of Vol.1 so, I got nothing else to say. [peace out!]

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