Life Hunter

I've read this novel since the beginning of it's creation and it blows my mind on how this much world building, backstory lore, and concrete plot is only ranked sub 100 among these other garbage novels in comparison to this master piece. This is by far the best hidden gem of novels I have read since moving to Qidian.

5/5 every chapter, every arc.

Legit for a novel that you wrote in school. This is better than most actual novels that are on here. I like your writing style a lot. Besides a few minor spelling errors i'm really immersed in this story.

I'm currently only ten chapters in, but I've already noticed some patterns that could be improved, especially in terms of writing quality. The big one for me is heavy use of passive voice eg: this character did instead of character said... Using a lot of existance verbs: did, was, is, will. I know the author isn't a native English speaker (I think) and this is a bit more nuanced then general English, but if he cut this out then his writing could be much better.

This story isn't particularly unique, but it is still captivating and I'm enjoying it quite a lot. The main character is super generic, but it's still fun to read. A few of the author notes acknowledge his silly ideas and generic plot points, and to paraphrase him- what does it matter as long as it's awesome. I like this philosophy, and feel like this goes against the grain of other authors on this site who get mired down trying to explain away why their ideas aren't stupid.

This authors strength lies in the fact that he gives enough detail to feel emersed and not so much that you stop feeling emersed. This author clearly has room for improvement but is definitely worth the read.

A good writer, great unfolding of plot, strong narrative, engaging story.... I what more can i say if not FABULOUS! FABULOUS! FABULOUSE!

Still reading another novel? Get in here! 👌🏾This is an author and translator to reckon with💝

Guns in a fantasy world. Literally the worst thing, dropped.



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love your story I will give it a 10/10 wasn't expecting this but it really is one of the best stories I have ever read.

Thank you very much ❤💯

I've seen this same novel here: https://***.royalroad.com/fiction/25126/life-hunter
posted by Karakazz, though it ends at chapter 74. You may want to check that out if someone is stealing your work since chapter 1 was posted 10 months ago.