The story isn't a terrible one but unfortunately the writing doesn't carry it across- this is due to a combination of mistakes in word choice and grammar as well as a general lack of understanding of the meanings of words. If you love reading MTL books for some reason, it should work for you but otherwise I would suggest you steer clear. If the author gets an editor and re-writes the chapters, I may re-review.
this novel is good, ****** and easy to understand, the personality of the protagonist is also good, the reason for not being better is the lack of a reason for existence of the protagonist, "immortality", "power", "women", finally things that humans long for and give meaning to their lives.
I don’t know why this doesn’t have more reviews. This is one of the best stories in this type of setting I have ever seen. The pace isn’t too slow or fast. The characters have an actual personality and the story is interesting. Thanks for the story!
3☆ for writing quality since it still has some mistake
5☆ for updating
2☆ for development
1☆ for charactor design
2☆ for world background
This is a readable novel writen in japanese style which love to **** the logic then and there, a lot of plot hole happened because of that. The MC doesn't have any charactor any killer have to be except for being cold and also looks more like a fomal type of justice protector MC in other novel.
Hello... I don't know what I'm supposed to say in a review of my own novel!
Why do I need to write at least 140 characters ?!
Well, like I said above, this novel is something that came out from young me's head but I didn't do much at that time. Like, enough to fill 2 chapters? You see the picture.
In the end I decided to pick this not even started work and continue it. I already thought of how the history will go, I already revealed a bit in the synopsis.
Sooo, yeah. If this novel survive, somehow, enough to include all the different fantasies in my head then I think I'll be proud of myself.
good characters, background, Main Character, and story.
I like how the mc does whatever he likes, his coldness, his strength and his personality the most.
simply a well written book, love it.
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A very interesting spin on story telling and the interpreter is excellent.
Wonderful read
5☆ for updating
2☆ for development
1☆ for charactor design
2☆ for world background
This is a readable novel writen in japanese style which love to **** the logic then and there, a lot of plot hole happened because of that. The MC doesn't have any charactor any killer have to be except for being cold and also looks more like a fomal type of justice protector MC in other novel.
Why do I need to write at least 140 characters ?!
Well, like I said above, this novel is something that came out from young me's head but I didn't do much at that time. Like, enough to fill 2 chapters? You see the picture.
In the end I decided to pick this not even started work and continue it. I already thought of how the history will go, I already revealed a bit in the synopsis.
Sooo, yeah. If this novel survive, somehow, enough to include all the different fantasies in my head then I think I'll be proud of myself.
The END.
I like how the mc does whatever he likes, his coldness, his strength and his personality the most.
simply a well written book, love it.