Koudo ni Hattatsu Shita Mahou wa Kami no Kiseki to Kubetsu ga Tsukanai

the blurb is interesting I can't wait to check the chapters! ?

Too much grammatical mistakes, most of the time you won't able to differentiate who he's referring to......And damn energy really...what is this, you combined soul energy and mana and was too lazy to name it and thus it became damn energy...like literally,try to be a little more innovative...😓

Is this a continuation of One Piece Kingdom Building By Ars??.......................................

I feel like I’m having a stroke reading this book because of how terrible the translation is as well as the pace of the story which all over the place!

Good updating quality and writing quality. Story has an overflow where you can follow to a good degree. That being said some major cons are as follows. Authors lack of commenting back to multiple criticisms during the novel. Second would be the Mc personality shift. Goes from hardworking to goofing off. He is initially shown as hardworking and serious but now he acts like a total clown. Too much forced humor that ruined a lot of the novel. Mc also seems to be pushing more towards a hero/shonen type. Mc also makes numerous idiotic mistakes such as not even checking the market price before selling something. Keeps making dumb mistakes constantly and under utilizing the lotus. Had so much potiental but left with so much frustration.

" kamu dimana yu.."

Gypsy was spoilt by her papa and oma for the reason of she's an only child and her mama is not around in their home anymore. They're not rich like others but Gypsy was showered with love and care by her guardians and her needs are attended properly. She was never neglected by Alejandra, her oma and by Achilles. She's a princess to them.

But it's normally used by The Kingdom of Horizon