chapters update are good i.e atleast 1 chap/day.story is also good to read .regarding his character I wish him to be more confident because he behaves a bit clueless and panick easily .writing style need improvement.
I have gotten to about ch 195 on outside sites. This book is decent in both background and writing. However the character is just out of whack. He is straight but seems gay for the whole first 100 chapters. He is supposed to be super smart but never shows it. The skills he receives are broken for the first and doesn’t make sense. If I remember right the icy shot skill has a percent chance of working works every time when the mc wants it to happen!!! What is the point of the others then!!! Its just constantly annoying to hear the author say he is a genius when the mc shows zero signs of those traits. He even seems to be dense and slow with some of his reactions. Archers were able to jump along branches within the beginning days and the mc is a genius just from doing the same thing??!?!!! That’s not genius if many others are able to do the same!!! Don’t tell us he is a genius, show us!!!! He just seems like a regular protected child that doesn’t know the world well. Otherwise, love the story and the world building. Just take away the genius point and you will have a good story on your hands author.
Well, here are my thoughts, my friends. Overall the story is quite good and gives you a pleasant experience. The Mc is not only smart but also has the strength to back it up. I can't wait to see him grow and fight a group of students of the hero academy.I hope this story continues because have a lot of potential to go over the hundreds of chapters. Keep up the good work.Praise to the all-mighty author
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Great story I feel it has a lot of potential but if I had one problem with it is that it never feels serious to me. even when the MC and friends are in a dangerous situation it feels really light hearted and cheerful and I can’t take it seriously it’s a shame too cause there are some parts that have great impact but are just blown over by ether the gags or the bloody fairy it doesn’t help that there are entire chapters that consist purely with jokes this is more apparent in volume 2 when everyone has settled in
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