I'm Done Being a Hero, Unless It's Retirement

Decent book - just wanted to let people know that there's actually a Chinese drama made out of this!!! My mom used to watch and I just felt a sense of deja vu while reading... I think it's called 庆余年? You should probably be able to find it on YouTube.

Honestly i was very interested in it at first because i like the general concept but the MC ruins it all. The author does not know how to right a good MC, this MC is literally someone that came from Earth and immediately starts just killing anyone who so much as disagrees with him. The MC is also a greedy bastard who does not know how to be a good leader and doesnt even try to be, just taking everything his new subordinates own and telling then they have to hand everything the earn at yue end of the month over, and threatens to kill then if they dont. Also no interesting side characters since they are all one dimensional characters who are either simply, enemy’s, traitors, yes-man subordinates, or random nobody’s. The so called “mechs” which are actually androids are more interesting and they also single minded things that can only follow orders. Not worth reading unless you literally have nothing else. Honestly dont know why the author wrote this kind of book when he pretty much doesn’t know what mechs are or anything about leadership. Well main character is also terrible so theres that too.

The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled.The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text.As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre.Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out.Good job, author!

Shameless author here, I would rate my story 5/5. This is my first story still i rate it very highly, i knowNot to toot my own horn but this is a really well-thought story with immense world-building and character design.I hope you can excuse the not so impeccable grammar in the first couple of chapters.The writing style improves as the story goes on trust me on this one

A good one. The cultivation speed is kind of slow and realistic, the kingdom building takes a good part of the story, unexpected good battles, a reasonable mc and good girls.

Yes I give my book a review becaus I like it 🫣

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