I Have a Secret

this a great story so far and the premise of going back in time to ww2 is a interesting concept that is rarely used I can't wait to see that gilhe suit in action

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Good story with good system and MC. But update is so slow...Ugh.                                                                                             

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Holy potatoes this is amazing! Never expected to find such a good reincarnation story out of the blue! Good storyline and steady progress! The ever-so-slightly humorous writing style wasn't really my cup of tea at first, but now I'm totally in love with this story! Can't wait for more!

This will be an indepth review from me so stop if you don't want spoilers for first 15 chapters or so.......The world - It's interesting with the abyss and layers and I hope to see the author explore it more as more times goes on in the story. Maybe even come up with unique climatic conditions etc.Grammer - Decent enough but with all I've read, it's a major inprovement. I didn't come to WN expecting perfect grammar and I didn't get it for most part. That being said, this is passable enough for me to not give up just from the grammer alone. It's rather fluid.Characters - They're interesting but many of them were introduced and were saved for later. who knows when that later might come or whether they'll be explored again or not. (I hope they do since the author takes notes to include them in their other story and the side-story is interesting )That being said, there is a little issue with the pacing being all over the place for me but nothing major. I like this story and would recommend you to check out the first few chapters to see if it's your cup of tea.

The writing quality is much better than most the books on webnovel. The thing that is lacking is that when I was reading the dialogues, it sounded monotonous to me. I felt like I couldn't see or understand the charcaters' expressions that time. Plot is much better and charcaters were nearly perfect. This is one epic harem romance novel if this is continued until the end of the book....

It's a really good story that follows the idea of jumping back in time. Even though it's a common novel idea, the author still manages to draw you into the world. The itemization and quests along with the fame system are well balanced and believable. The writing of the environment also paints a grand picture of the game in your mind.The only thing I would note is that it has a slow start to the story, taking around seven chapters before you even get into the time jump. So if you can stick around for that then you're in for a good ride!