I am shamelessly leaving this review as review #10 to get my rating. So far, I'm trying to maintain 2 chapters a day, so I sure hope you like hot milfs 😎👍
I must say I really like the story development. I think the mc is not inherently evil, the way he was raised is evil, not experiencing the love of his parents and no friends. If he was rescued before all that he won't be thinking the way he is now but yeah the world is truly broken...actually there's no evil and good. Bruh I'm allergic to pure goodness without anything in exchange lol, that's absurd. I like how the mc is evil hehehehe. Although, can i just ask if the romance is already cut off from him or there will be another? how will this end I'm excited to find out
Hello, struggling author here. I would like to point out the things to expect from this book. But first...After 160 chapters, I will finally leave a word here since the book is gaining more readers than I could have possibly known when I wrote it. So, to all my readers who have made it possible for my book to be here, I owe you everything. Thank you, you guys are the best.To my new readers, here is what to expect when you decide to read this book,The Good:1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.2. I am your friend.The Bad:1. First dozen chapters are incredibly rough. I didn’t think it was going to get traction at all since I was a beginner writer. I won’t edit them for now, in the hopes that you see how I improved throughout the story.2. Grammar mistakes. Usually mixing up gender pronouns since they don’t exist in my language.2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.5. Young and Unstable MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC starts at 5 years old. He will be naïve, clueless, and not to mention, irrational. But he is and foremost, powerful. In short, he’s a time bomb.6. Character driven – The story will always revolve around the MC.7. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span.Here's what to do before reading this book:1. Play some music.2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when a baby can literally fly.4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw.Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
I like the world building so far, and I think that It promise. I like the inclusion of different pov's; as we can see what the side characters think of the main character.Wish you luck on this story
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