I Can't Write Any 'Below the Neck' Love Scenes

    Author: GUYU SMELL INCENSE,古玉闻香
  • Status: Complete

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  1. JBFIRE77x3H
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    So I guess that's what makes me self-centered right
  1. BDRAG
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    "Ensign Nitche, welcome to the Horizon, Captain Noxt would like to see you right away."
  1. SovsemNikto
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    'Someday, I will make mom happy'
  1. BuayButler
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    I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.
  1. CAESAR20WZx
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    Great novel, and awesome story development. and hey that cover is looking fire, come to think of it all your covers look fire. Any advice on how to get such covers?C'mon help a guy out

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