Heavenly Curse

*MYA! Nom-Nom Mew! Meh. Mew. Meh-Heh-Heh.*(Listen up you wet bananas! I, the over 9000 INT Tama, is here to tell you all why you should read this or become my food! Also, you are required to give me your red powered jelly stone things for my efforts in writing this or I’ll make you not only a wet banana but a spilt one too!This story could be better if it was just about me hence only 4 stars for story development. My banana human is just that, a banana. Sometimes they have a wu-wu, others a wee-wee. Its weird, but ignore the boy trap and just focus on me, Tama.Some call me an eggcat, but those someones are bananas. I am a super awesome, all knowing foodie descendent from a dragon-like creature. Basically perfect, yeah.The world I live in is great! There all sorts of foods everywhere! Humans, zombies, green eggs, and ham? Tuna, snakes, scorpions, etc. My owner is abusive though and only feeds Tama the bare minimum, please call protective services for Tama before she starves to death!Author needs to write more so that Tama can show everyone how amazing they are in comparison to everyone else who are bananas. Author you banana, hurry up and give Tama more delicious foods and smarter humans. Poor Tama can only take so many bananas.. wait, that sounds wrong ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) heh-heh, banana Mish will take them in Tama’s place.But chop chop! *Mya-Nom-Nom!*

Wrong synopsis and wrong title, maybe I should say wrong content. Author Let me handle it did not handle it well. If you want to, just read the first few chapters and then the very last chapter (even the regression becomes mostly irrelevant in between) . There is no indication but I hope it has a sequel because the story has barely started despite 300+ chapters.

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I must say this was quite an entertaining read. The story does an amazing job of building up relationships with realistic reasonings behind character actions. The world-building seems to be developing at a steady pace and would make a great setting. Alas, there has not been any update in 2 years and the author has not posted since on any of their novels.If this novel ever begins again I think it has the makings to be one of the best. If you read this author, please, please, continue the novel. It was so good.

I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!

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