Hated By The Alpha, Loved By The Lycan

A bright monday morning in the month of june Druv saw her for the first time being dropped at school by her uncle. She was wearing a beige collared top and a long straight brown skirt. she walked through the gate with such an elegance and attitude as if it was her world. Druv parked his bike at the stand and stood gaping at her.  All his friends were waiting for him at the gate as it was their first day of school after 2 months of holidays. Druv's closest friend was calling him by all the funny names he could but in vain. Druv was not giving him a shit of attention. Suddenly the school bell rang, it was 9 A.M, the time for school prayer. The bell ringing woke up Druv from his daze. He then saw his friends calling him to come fast. With a mesmerising smile on his face thinking about the girl he had seen at parking lot he got to the school ground to attend the prayer. After the prayer commenced the new comers in each class were introduced on the stage. Then came the girl ..... she said....Hi everyone i am Misty which means sweet, i will be attending classes in 9th grade.

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This novel shows a lot of potential. The writing style is pretty good, and I get what the author is going for with the sentence structure and tone they're using. Sometimes, though there are some odd symbols (like a '='), and it disrupts the flow.  Characters seems pretty good, as does the world, and story development. I'll have to keep reading to see what happens next.