Hakushaku Reijou ga Musuko no Yome ni Natte Hajimaru Muriyari Ninshin Seikou no Hibi

Flawless job! Plot is well painted in detail. Unique characters, supernatural based books like this are truly thrilling to read. A book like this needs a movie or tv show!

71 chapters in an I still do not see the MC being carefree as the summary says. MC is brutal, dragged into the xianxia type of kill or be killed. The part about him quietly tending his farm is actually a lie - he sneaks out and kills his enemies, and then heads back. I was expecting more carefree and his opponents not being able to do a thing to him while he peacefully farms, or needs to defeat his enemies only when trouble arrives with a snap of his hand. The dreams aren't actually told, just mentioned at a glance. Characters are a joke, MC is barely ok based on what he does, but everyone else has a scheming third villain type of personality. What a joke. The ferret and the eagle has a better personality than the enemies. The 30 chpts in the beginning is ok. There was potential. Spiritual knights sound interesting, but 70 chapters in, MC is letting me down.At a certain chapter, it is briefly mentioned a particular alchemist refuses to help sects because he is carefree and could care less about the world. I think the real MC is actually that alchemist and not the current MC since this MC is being a petty typical xianxia MC that aims to kill everyone who threatens him and not a carefree one like the summary described. Seriously, if someone thought you were dead and you escaped, why bother going back to kill the guy if he never put you in his eyes, nor will he attempt to find you since you aren't related to a sect and live in a secluded valley?The other thing that bothered me is how the MC would go through a dead body and search through it - blood and guts because he found a treasure inside the guy and not on his bag/loot. I'm hoping I really read that wrong since MC is not being an ideal character to represent a carefree path in the world of dreams.

the writing quality, the world background are good but the story in itself is pretty confusing. adding character images may help a bit...but starting chapters upto 25 will leave you confuse and not wanting to read more.

Why has the auThour stoped writingi had really started liking this book then bam its gon i sm kinda disappointed this is s great book i juSt hope it comes back .i have rab out of things to say but thE dumb word couNt wont let me submit the comment

as I said before this is the updated review.good book for some people but not for me, Mc is a little beta (forgot the word I have in my mind) and didn't like NPCs character, if you don't mind Mc having weak personality (didn't find the right words for the description of Mc, this is the nearest description I could write) this book is good for u.liked author's previous work (portable something) and liked this novel's idea.good work author 👍

I love this book overall as a whole. Really I like all of the characters except one. the main female they made her too stupid. She really took the whole "dumb blonde" to heart. other than that I love the book. wish that we could get another book in the same universe. Maybe something with Samuel maybe five hundred or a thousand years later or something that would be awesome.

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His friend shook his head, all the while, speaking into his ear. The Alfan's face became pained. The wounded soldier seemed to accept whatever his fellow was telling him. And he shouted something into the battle. A moment later, he was gone, and the other soldier rushed back into action, always trying to remove another human from the battle.