Golden Spoon Investor

Sandra was tired by the time she walked to his cabin and her cover of confidence was broken . She stumbled into his office as his deep voice stirred something inside her deep down .

He could rob a few street gangsters, and then…. He himself was one of the poor….

How could someone be so beautiful?

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Author here. Please Support me. Tell me your what you all think. Your critiques are important. Please be lenient.

So far good and It's your first novel. I guess you're trying to maintain the hero mysterious that's why everywhere hero is always mentioned as 'he'. But i think i got the reason in chapter 10. About hindu god's inclusion I'm not sure and it's my first time reading a novel such as this. Guess I'll find out as the story progresses. Your world is also a little unique and also seems vast since it's a fantasy world with magic as mages levels are introduced, it also has monsters, god's and kingdoms as you mentioned. Keep going i feel this has great potential. Hope you update more frequently.

I already like the system theme in a novel so your’s a plus for me. It’s an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Love the setting and composure of the writer. I highly recommend it.

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It is seriously quite intriguing although it feels like running sometimes but too good a read that the pacing is okay with me