the story is decent. but sometimes the author focuses too much on what the characters are doing, and it doesn't flow well. making it hard to read. this wasn't as big a problem in her last book. maybe she needs to update less or take a break.
Even though the grammar needs work in some parts, it doesn't fully detract from the storyline. I can, for the most part, overlook it, but I did leave comments for some of the worst offending paragraphs. However, I do like the characters and the overall plot of the book.
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Seems like a line up destined for failure
I saw him too
It seems he's searching "cultured novels" these days