Fated To The Alpha Twins

so far loving this book

The book needs to be reviewed for consistency and grammar. The writing itself feels immature.

Seems to have a good plot, & could be really good with a more mature author. Aspects of the writing seem very juvenile/sheltered, and there's a BIG issue with consistency. Canon seems to change from one scene to the next, based solely on how the author wants to move the plot. Didn't finish reading.

It’s amazing but frustrating how I have to watch ads just to read it .........

the title is a dead giveaway

i realy liked this story. It's one of the only chinese novels i have enjoyed, the only one (that i read) that juste doesn't say "i won because i have depest background or because i'am just the strongest". The main character morality is not as devious as describ in other comments... i didn't get where the rape part occured... anyway, a lot of chinese saying. it's give me kind of "karate kid movies" with shameless masters instead feeling with a lot of life teaching sentence that i found great.
i realy like to travel in another way of wiewing the world through chinese culture viewpoint. it's quite a different view from koreen or japonese one and this book give a realy different vibe on the point.
it quite dynamique, more than "the cooling dragon" webnovel and i definitly recommand it

Yo starbeck just came in his pants lmao

"Brother Guang. life is like getting raped, if you can't resist, you can only enjoy" say young master

- ML is actually a "virus" according to the main system. He was the one that damaged the main system in the beginning and got severely injured, thus causing Tian He to cycle through worlds so that he could collect his powers from the many soul parts distributed across the many worlds.