Fated To The Alpha Twins

So far ok ...

Cont from last comment. I think the book has great potential but the style of the writing needs to be cleaned up a lot to make it more flowing and easier to read.

I m currently on chapter 9 I like the overall plot of the story so far. I am having difficulty reading it, not sure if the authors first language is English as it almost seems as though the way some of it is written is how someone would translate from their language to English. See next comment

The book is good in general. The author has a lot of potential. However, it is too slow going for my liking, I still will give a ..., though ...

Yeah ok so far!

I have gotten to chapter 12, but I can tell it's going to be my favorite storylines

I know i can mostly likely trust your opinions with such a fire name - Do you have any other novels similar to Chronicles of Primordial Wars, specifically novels that have that tribal period even if its just temporary lmao it's really hard to find ANY

Chinese names are really difficult to remember, it sounds similar. zhao, zhou, wang, wu, li, lee blah blah blah. its annoying.

like really, i dont remember a single chinese characters in the story other than the MC Zhao Fu.