Yon! Ang mabuti pa, maglaro nalang sila. Andy needs to break away from stress. Ark needs to take a break for a while kaya sumama sila sa salesman papunta sa 'office nito' sa loob ng mall.
The plot is interesting, and the drama up to now didn’t drag. However, the content is unreadable due to the massive grammatical errors with word choice, punctuation, and sentence structure. Some paragraphs end with ellipses, whereas others don’t have periods. It’s like a confusing stream of consciousness. The author states that she updated the story via her phone, which explains the numbers in place of letters. If an editor or proofreader helps, the book would be worth the money.
I really liked it, you are a genius writer. It is not just a horror story, but a novel that combines romance, tragedy, horror, action and fantasy. It is a unique mixture that I rarely see anything like it. Well done, little boy.
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