Exudos

                              _                                                                         ,              this a good progressing novel

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The system the mc has isn't what I was expecting, bringing down my expectations to rock bottom. The title might as well be changed to 'Immortal Hero: I can see the Answers.'That's basically what happens when the system is used. MC uses it, gets the success rate and should have called it a day. But wait a minute, there's more! The next system blurb states what the MC needs to do to get that percentage to 100%, reducing the MC to your average MC depending mostly on the whims of the system, and not using their own skills and intelligence.

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The story is Kind of meh. Grammar and Vocabulary need work.The Characters are kind of stagnant, not sure about this part, sometimes the story is good.

Nice story so far..🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂👍👍👍👍good luck,and more chapter ahead 🙂🙂👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗☺️☺️☺️...

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I'm just here to give a review, though I can't say much about your work as not much happened yet, though I'll say it's interesting to read and you're doing good being a firstimer :>