the book is okay. started great.then the whole thing is a little tacky moving forward, Exec sec seems to be involved then the moms sec is screwing the ML. FL is careless, tacky a lil bit. the summ was written well but the book isnt as good as I thought. 5.9/10 for this. ill read your other books too
50 chapters in. Story overall isn’t that bad. I honestly didn’t expect that the thief was a good person and thought that it was her that set up the backstab.Harem is alright not my preference I was just interested in new titles and fantasy worlds.I don’t understand why he didn’t talk to thief girl since he straight up talked to plant lady in the beginning. I get it that he doesn’t want to be exposed for being a talking orc but at the same time wasn’t his goal supposed to be to find thief girl marry her and make babies? Why’d he just let her go north.Sometimes the storytelling isn’t that clear.The MC is somewhat weak compared to others. Honestly speaking I think they took a small bit of aspects from wow in the main character. As in both main characters are genuinely strong but in cut scenes or big parts they are weak af.I am going to stop reading though.All in all it’s not a bad read I probably just read it too fast and not clearly enough.Also harem me is questioning why hasn’t he shagged murv? Muv? I forgot. Fairy archer lady.
The author's novels are like that... The Epic of Caterpillar is similarly slow at first but picks up pace and then we get long fight chapters and even s** scenes.
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