Haaa. Finished reading to the latest chapter and I'm stuck on a cliff again. Amazing. This is only the second time I've binged an original like this. This is a hidden gem and I'm surprised and pissed at how underpopular it is. What are you waiting for? Go start reading.In case you weren't convinced here's the review:Writing- 5/5 Reads like a published novel. Nothing to say here. It is a bit fast paced at parts and less detailed than your usual case-solving style novel. Written very well nonetheless. Very easy to imagine and everything is described well even with fewer details.Plot- 5/5Amazing so far. I usually end up predicting a lot of the plot and planting my flags, but here I had a clue in the middle of a few arcs maybe at most. Unpredictable plots but not annoyingly convoluted. Characters- 6/5THIS IS WHAT DID IT FOR ME. Among the best characterisation I've seen on this site. Not just the main characters, but all of them. The three things I loved the most in this novel were 1. Levi2. Sam3. The interactions between Levi and SamLevi's monologues, dialogues, behaviour are all very fun to read. The romance(?) is really well done. Exactly the kind of romance I like. If I had to give a comparision, it's somewhat similar to Hachiman and Yukino in Oregairu or Jo Minjoon and Kaya Lotus in God of Cooking. If you are sick of those CEO romance novels then give this unique take a read. Overall, must read. I've read 100s of originals on this sight and this is in my top 2 favourites. Suggestions for the author: There's nothing much I can say here. 1. In the starting few chapters there are some spelling/ grammar errors.(Very few of them hardly noticeable) Some places have comma instead of period. One place had slick blood instead of slick blonde. Couple places have wrong tense, wrong gender. I think you can fix it if you read it once :)2. For time skips within a chapter, you can leave a gap of few more lines or draw a line with stars********************************************************like this. It helps keep the imagination steady. Like seriously...there's no major flaws in the novels and I can only pick on things like this :pPlease keep up the good work.
OMG.. yes PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!huhuhu... I was feeling empty when the novel ended but when i saw this while browsing webnovel, I almost cried. Thamk you so much author. I dont care if its short-Just being able to read a bit more is fine...
I’m looking forward to how you make formations relevant to our mc cultivation journey. A interesting way formations was utilized in a novel I’ve read in the past was that instead of having to be set before a conflict to have effect the mc could set one up in seconds as his skill peaked. Also Ik mc usually master multipleskills like pill crafting and weapons forging but I believe it would be refreshing to see our mc specialized in formations only and it would be more realistic.
Hello, This is my review after reading 185 chapters. So, if I were to describe this story using one word, then it would be the word "magic". The story uses a pace that I think is perfect. In real life, we usually spend months preparing for something that ends after a few minutes. That aspect is respected in this story.Wouldn't that be boring? You might ask. No, would be my answer. The way Link does research and plans everything before hand reminds me of a certain warlock. *wink*The other characters aren't just dumb NPCs waiting for the MC to save them. They think and behave in ways that feel real. Link faces hardships, and not everything goes as planned. This allows the story to be a delight to read. We can see that the MC does not know everything. He can not do everything as well. He, however, does his homework and work hard. That, plus a boost from a certain system allows him to be OP. But not too much.The characters have distinct personalities, and the mc's personality is very likeable. The world building is not shoved down our throats and it flows naturally.The dialogues feel very natural and not forced. Something that is rarely found in Chinese novels.Finally, there's no repetition and no filler chapters. The translation quality is very good and stable. Overall, I highly recommend this novel. I also wish to thank everyone involved in bringing this novel to us. Much love from Algeria!
I love the Qualoty over Quantity approach! I really can't wait to see what other "blocked functions" exist for the system. I wonder if there will ever be some sort of telepathic parasite for communication or some other utility parasite that isnt for staling abilities directly.
In all my Life I've never seen a Novel of such filth in this world. I'm pretty sure the NTR genre would be more satisfying than reading such a worthless Novel to read. I just realized that I never even finished reading this atrocity of a novel. How could you birth something this bad into this already chaos-filled world? You are what makes the Novels in Webnovel truly abominable. And what is that embarrassing background-How could you make a background with so detailed filth.Please don't ban me WN, I'm just doing this for the Author;-;Do you want some KFC man?
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