I'm having a good development from the beginning, the protagonist is not too idiotic and the plot simply does not make everyone look like idiots.At the moment we are on chapter 22 if I remember correctly and I hope that the personality of the protagonist advances with his ambitions and becomes someone Dominant like a tyrant. Let him only defend interests, since he comes from below and only his fat partner helps him as a roommate. Help him contribute in the future to repay that favor.
It’ good it just needs a lot more chapters. I like the storyline to it looks very interesting just try to spam out chapters especially when it’ earlys try to expand with the transmigration part to
Heyo people. This is the author here. This is the first novel that I have written on here. In all honesty, I have no idea what schedule i will be posting, so yeah. If you find mistakes, please put them in the comments next to the paragraph. I will try to fix them when I get to them. Also, if you have suggestions, I am all ears, just once again put them in the comments. Now I hope you all have a wonderful rest of your day. From your truly: The author
This novel does a great job with providing vivid descriptions and setting the tone of the story immediately.The opening chapter was well written, with cool characters being introduced, along with some great lines and descriptions.The story does start off slow, but it’s compensated by the world building being set for a grand story.All in all, a story I would definitely recommend if you’re into reincarnation!Great job, author! 👍🏻
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