永遠の約束の残響 (Echoes of Eternal Promise) English Version

I really enjoy your series so far Melak. Keep up the great work.

now Kai Has been through tough times and the way you put him out there is something I really emulate, something I think I'll try on one of my characters in the new book I'm working on. Over all it's a great book, five stars from me😊

Wonder when he'll stop dropping books that don't make enough money. Author doesn't seem to have any passion for his books and will just drop, start a new series then drop that one too. Disappointing as I really liked Isekai Ascension 😔

The story has the potential to be  a good story, but the writing is bad, lots of spelling mistakes, lack of world building and character development.

Love the story so far! Just wish we could know more about the power system and surrounding areas a tad bit more! Excited to see this pan out! Hope it’s a bit long!

The premise is really intriguing and seems to be well-thought. And the author is able to maintain the tension throughout the chapters, along with the usual cliffhangers (hate it or love it).The apocalyptic setting is a nice respite from the abundance of “gates” with which these types of stories are usually laden. And the golden finger seems to encourage step-by-step and reasonable progression, which I personally prefer, rather than dumping overpowered skills or items at the whim that gets old fast unless the writing is top-notch.Although there are still only a few chapters at the time of writing this review, I’m looking forward to seeing how the story develops and what role Leon will assume in this sort of dystopian world. Good luck, author!

Hi author I think the novel is good but not my type and here are some suggestions or ideas for a new novel