Dracula by Bram Stoker

There is big issue with this novel, the MC is a psycho, who doesn't value life, everything can be done in order to gain more power like conducting experiments on innocent humans, eating human and stuff, at one point he literraly forsake his humanity for power. He's plain evil and clearly deserve to die. It would have been ok if the storytelling was not biased, but the author clearly approves the decision of the MC, implying the mc is pragmatic and right while kind hearted people who value life like daniel are soft and weak minded. I'm giving a bad grade because people reading it if careless can be brainwashed into accepting filthy and evil ideas subtely.

Yuki Is Love, Yuki is Life and she even slaps Thots who try to touch her Wifu.If girls love and VRMMORPGs is your cup of tea, you have come to the right place.(Ps. Be sure to vote so we can read extra chapters)

Decent read .I liked it. One of the better trail reads. The premise is simple to understand and follow. It's a little fast paced in the beginning, but it gets better with more chapters

This book is in my opinion a masterpiece, the quality for the author, as an amat*ure, is amazing. With the majority of books on this site being either good grammar with a bad plot or bad grammar and a good plot, it is refreshing to see one with both positives.I love the idea he went for and the way in which the author has executed it, it is marvelous, and I wish that my own were of this quality.The update rate is very good and the chapters are long as well, which is always a plus. It is also refreshing to see non-2D side characters.

I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation. I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops. But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds

Fantastic read! I wasn't expecting to like this one as much as I did, so this is a pleasant surprise and hidden gem for me! Here are my notes (feels like they're kinda short):~For once, I don't feel the need to ramble about grammar. The only issues I see are some miscellaneous punctuation mistakes (always only with commas--typically their overuse). Sometimes, the dialogue tags are actions that aren't some variation of speaking (like laughing), so a period would be needed instead of a comma. Other times, the dialogue tags are actions like screaming that can be inferred from the dialogue and can instead be replaced by sentences with actions! Most other issues are one-off.~The style and word choice when you describe things are excellent! The fantasy elements are especially vivid, particularly the chilling images of the Ghosts.~The concepts are clear and make sense overall (the world, Phantoms, Angelicas, etc), so I didn't find myself having to spend too much time re-reading those bits. Impressive start!~It seems like this is a rewrite from a system novel based on your notes, and while I can sort of feel some of those elements seeping in with either Reaper or Zelestria, they're very much palatable as someone who doesn't quite get/like systems.~I like how realistic it is that Finn... fails pretty badly with his powers the first time he uses them and that his resolve doesn't necessarily carry him. (Of course, it's fun to see him become much more powerful after that with the cool armor and gauntlets, but it is a good progression.)~The transition from Chapter 4 to 5 is a tad confusing, mainly because I assumed the aforementioned teen was Finn. I think it would be slightly more clear if a setting in the vein of "Elsewhere in District A" was written instead of "Somewhere in District A".~Octane is hilarious! He's so funny, and I love his antics! (I'm still laughing about him smashing the wheelchair.)~If it isn't obvious from my paragraph comments, I also seriously adore Zelestria! (SSS-Tier waifus promise: delivered so far!)~I was not expecting the twist of Finn being a half-Ghost as a result of his life being saved! I get the feeling this concept will be explored later, so I'm excited to see if that happens!~In Chapter 9, "however" is used almost every other sentence after Finn walks into Iris' room, which threw me off a little.~There's some contradictory information about Angelicas between Chapters 10 and 11. The first states that almost everyone has an Angelica, while the second states that they're rarer.~In this world, do modern countries exist? It seems like there are only districts (as detailed in the auxiliary chapters), so a comment like someone having an accent (specifically, the comment about an "English accent" in Chapter 14) doesn't make sense in that case.~I love how the dialogue is distinct and clear! I often have issues distinguishing characters or following along, so this is refreshing.~There are some adverb and verb redundancies (like "directly in the direction" in Chapter 17).-After reading the fight scene in Chapter 19, I really like how you describe fights! If you'd want any advice, I suppose you could try to make them less mechanical at times and imbue them with emotions like, say, Finn's hatred and rage towards the Ghost for taking away his teammates (a possible "found family" of sorts), but that certainly has to be balanced well with actual actions.I honestly don't have many critiques! Virtually nothing stood out to me as awkward or egregious. It's a good balance between humorous and bad*ss. I'll definitely be lurking around more for Finn's adventures... (5/5)

if u dropped this novel I ain't forgiving you! It's so so so so so Good!......................  welp that's all I'm saying I'm here to support you

Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake.A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly.Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.